Five Sentence Fiction: Human

Thanks, as always, to Lillie McFerrin… 

via Wikimedia Commons

via Wikimedia Commons

“It was his eyes, detective. I have never seen anything like it. When he turned around as he left, it was the first time I got a look at his face. And it was his eyes… they had no pupils. He wasn’t human.”

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4 thoughts on “Five Sentence Fiction: Human

  1. “It was his eyes” had me worried this was going to turn out cliched, but I really liked it. You didn’t fall into the trap of evil metaphors that crop up everywhere. A really snappy, intriguing piece.

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